Build Ups/Break Downs, Beat and Mastering
Well, I like the song.
[The melodies and beats are all there, but the breakdowns and build ups take to long, especially in the beginning]
(You can eliminate useless repetitiveness by making your build ups and break downs shorter)
As for the drums and bass. I feel there is to much focus on the melodies and not the drum and bass.
[The genre is Drum and Bass after all]
(Maybe turn down the melodies, turn up the beat, and add more to it)
Also, mastering might be something you want to do again, if you've already done so.
[I don't know if its my speakers, but occasionally where it is "messy" I'm getting that static sound here and there]
But besides that, you got a good song.
[Keep up the good work]
Yeah, this song was very... cute.
The transitions need work, its also quite repetitive.
But, 9/10 5/5.
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