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This is...

AMAZING!!!

Build Ups/Break Downs, Beat and Mastering

Well, I like the song.
[The melodies and beats are all there, but the breakdowns and build ups take to long, especially in the beginning]
(You can eliminate useless repetitiveness by making your build ups and break downs shorter)

As for the drums and bass. I feel there is to much focus on the melodies and not the drum and bass.
[The genre is Drum and Bass after all]
(Maybe turn down the melodies, turn up the beat, and add more to it)

Also, mastering might be something you want to do again, if you've already done so.
[I don't know if its my speakers, but occasionally where it is "messy" I'm getting that static sound here and there]

But besides that, you got a good song.
[Keep up the good work]

-Nubby Cakums

Hello There,

Yeah, this song was very... cute.

The transitions need work, its also quite repetitive.

But, 9/10 5/5.

-Nubby Cakums

Its good... but,

I feel that it is lacking a good break down.
[That part where all the "tension" is broken]
There are some, but the difference between them is minute.

Also the heavy bass disappears after the intro.
[It is a dance song... right?]

Otherwise, you are improving... a lot.
Just in your basic styling and finishing, and I can't wait till you master what you are doing.
[Because all your stuff will be a hit]

-Nubby Cakums

DunderMifflin Paper Company!

Over I love The Office, and I must say this remix was done superbly.
[However, I was really hoping for more of a dancy climax, All the build up seemed it would have that sort of thing]
{That noise you used for the background melody was a tad bit annoying}
Nothing more to say,
Great Job,
-Nubby Cakums

ganon95 responds:

thanks

Why the Clashing Notes?

If it wasn't for those the fighting notes this song would be getting a 5/5 and 10/10
[For now its 4/5 and 7/10]
Just change those notes and I guarantee you will have a top audio.

-Nubby Cakums

Thats what I'm Talking About!

There we go!
This is exactly what I was talking about.
[The months of work you put into this definitely shows]

Excellent Job, 5/5 10/10
-Nubby Cakums

Bahdshah responds:

awesome!! thanks loads bro!

Bulid Up

The entire song was great but the "Build Up" to release just wasn't there.
The type of Saw sound you made seems like the type you use to build up to the climax.
[Its that softened/muffled type of saw]
Otherwise the song was great!
I would just a crisper sounding saw to get the people jumping.

-Nubby Cakums
[I'll be sure to take a look at your other Techno Rocker]

Audio Pick Up?

For some reason, anytime the guitar is being used, it has the type of pickup that you get when you hold a microphone up to a speaker and record.
[Its just that "crispy sounding" noise, maybe it was the effects you used, but it doesn't sound very appealing to the ear]
The drums are also to soft for a song called "Ambush and Retaliation"
[I expected more snare than any other drum sound]
It also gets a tad bit repetitive in the middle.

But this song does hold a lot of potential,

Add more melodies, try to soften things up a bit, and make the drums louder, and we'll see where it is then.

Hope this helps,
-Nubby Cakums

B-E-A-Utiful

This song is simply beautiful, you clearly put time and effort into this piece and it really shows.
The transition from the piano to the more percussion feeling part was excellent, and the rest that followed was great.

[But there was one part in the beginning, where there sounded like there was "Electronic Pickup" I don't know if its my speakers, or what, but its hardly noticeable.]
Otherwise, its perfect.

Great Job,

-Nubby Cakums

ObsidianSnow responds:

Awesome, I'm glad you thought so.

I'm not sure what you mean by "Electronic Pickup", though... The only thing I can think of that being is one of the background synths I put in there, but I'll take another look.

Thanks for the review, NubbyCakums!

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